I decided to experiment a little with this, I applied a few new photo textures to the gravestones and I darkened most of the edges of the piece, I think it adds a little atmosphere to the dramatic colours I was looking for. Overall I'm pleased with it.
Great! I like this version best of the two! Is this a real place?
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Nice! I like this one better than the other one. I love the nice clean linework and the way the sun comes through the clouds. The only thing I can critique about is that the lines of the bricks/stones on the church aren't equal in some places. I also think the graveyard is maybe too dark, I really had to look for it. Anyway, this is really nice Good job!
woah ! Mikey this is by far one of your best works simply amazing I like the texture you gave the church and the mist is great too but my favourite part would have to be the sky
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*gasps*Woah!!very amazing experiment!!!Its almost as if youre ready to get sucked up into the piece itself!!!
Very well done!!!and i really love the lighting and the shading <3
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